The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC January competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 6: Criminal equips pack, head of crowbar poking out, the despicable man

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A clue to PIPSQUEAK.
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Comments on the clue
1.'The' is perhaps redundant.
2.An imaginative attempt at fodder. I wasn't completely persuaded by poking out (deletion), criminal (anagrind) or despicable man (def).
 
Comments on the competition
1.
Answers were strangely consistent. Clues were usually serviceable but lacking the spark of inspiration.
Several took the opportunity to use a Spoonerism – I thought 4 the best of these.
For anagrams, perhaps the letters made it difficult for fodder to go beyond quip, pique and quean. 6 and 37 had deletions from the fodder.
Pip was defined in different ways – I liked the reference to Great Expectations in 25 and 7.
Definitions in several cases settled for something straight forward – often nothing, nobody or nonentity.