CCCWC October competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 25

A clue to YO-YO.
4 comments refer to this clue (from 4 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	I'm not convinced that starts can apply to ALL the words. "Ma starts to yell out your orders", perhaps?
2.	Needs to be ‘Ma perhaps’
3.	Nice smooth surface but hinges on general knowledge
4.	I think "…starts to…" would be clearer