The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC October competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 12: Frisky toy boy, no thoroughbred, but one providing satisfying ups and downs

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A clue to YO-YO.
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Comments on the clue
1.Credit for coming up with an original definition, and risqué clues seem to do well here
2.Hmmm I don't think you can get away with tb = thoroughbred
 
Comments on the competition
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A lot of clues use the obvious "toy", "boy" or both, so they need something extra to stand out. I think 12 is the best of those, but the straightforward definition of "toy" in 5 is my top choice.