The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC April competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 4: Bung that finished off Tory created stir?

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A clue to CHOKEY.
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Comments on the clue
1.'That finished off' doesn't mean 'that which finishes off'
2.I feel that "finished off" doesn't clearly indicate the selection of the last letter from the succeeding word.
 
Comments on the competition
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Some nice topical clues with the approaching election 28 33 34.

"Hockey" seems too close to the spelling of "chokey" to be a worthwhile anagram 8 23 24 26 42. Hockey is perhaps better done as a reference to a game, well executed in 5 7 11 29.

"Prison" 1 3 9 16 20 31 42 43 44 45 and "jail" 46 50 are perhaps too straightforward as definitions; more interesting (and allowing a more misleading surface reading) are the slang words such as "nick" 11 33 34, "stir" 4 29, "cooler" 17 28, "can" 5 6 7 8 51, "stretch" 49 which offer multiple possible other meanings.