The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 9: For initiation of both, love and intimacy, sex ultimately is redundant (6)

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A clue to PROLIX.
2 comments refer to this clue (from 1 competitor, 1 other)

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Comments on the clue
1.I've given you points for a nice clue… despite the rogue comma after 'both'!
2.The first comma affects the true reading of the clue for the superficial