The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 50: Unhappily long for kiss on lips when missing other half

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A clue to PROLIX.
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Comments on the clue
1.Lovely definition, well camouflaged. Wonder whether both half-lips clues could've used parted lips or something like that?
2.Nice one – very similar to clue 21. Longer but with an equally effective surface reading.
3.Precise definition, appealing image conjured up by the surface reading and sound but interesting wordplay – surely a winner!
4."Long" on its own – 21 22 – seems not quite adequate as a definition of "prolix". The addition of "Unhappily gives this clue the edge.
5.Nearly got points – but "other" half?
 
Comments on the competition
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Some very good clues this time and hard to choose between them. In the end I chose 31 and 50 as equal top because of the precise definition, appealing image conjured up by the surface reading and sound but interesting wordplay.