The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 18: Lines of fans cheered agile duo Glover and Stanning, while that most renowned rowing giant Sir Steve Redgrave wept delightedly. Eton Dorney witnessed his typically British cool demeanour yielding to emotion

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A clue to DIALOGUE, MONSTER, SCHOOL (DLM).
4 comments refer to this clue (from 4 competitors, 0 others)
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Comments on the clue
1.Reads smoothly and nice description of an actual event, shame there's lots of padding though
2.Eton could be defined by school but I don't think it works the other way around without an indication that it is an example
3.somewhat laboured
 
Comments on the competition
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I find it very difficult to judge this type of competition. However clue 8 does not conform to the rules, and clues 1 and 30 don't have an Olympic or Paralympic theme. I think one must allow a certain leeway with the definitions (LINES for DIALOGUE?) although I'm not keen on ETON in 18 and 25 or HIGH in 28 for SCHOOL: it's usual to flag DBE's somehow (see 11 15 and 23) and I don't see why that shouldn't also apply to DLM clues. My final choice is 22 13 21 23 29 in that order.