The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC June competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 11: Conservative strumpet: 'as Boris told a lie?

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A clue to ORATES (Printer’s Devilry).
5 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 2 others)
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Comments on the clue
1.Undevilled version a little too unnatural
2.or who is told a lie? (are told?)
3.A nice idea but "or is told a lie" in the undevilled version makes no sense
4.Would have liked this better if undevilled text had been more grammatical
 
Comments on the competition
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Undevilled versions should not be compromised in any waay to improve the devilled version, eg an initially promising 5, 8, 11, 17, etc.