CCCWC October competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 11

A clue to MOCKTAIL (New Chambers Word).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	Clever use of drunk in surface and as anagrind.
2.	I think 'drunk' works better as an anagrind after the anagram fodder. The punctuation interrupts the wordplay here too.