The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 23: Five of hearts…four of clubs…or a spade taken at random?

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A clue to PASTEBOARD.
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Comments on the competition
1.
27 is clever, but it seems to me to be an indirect anagram – (the PAST bit) 23 Too many people have resorted to anagrams. This one is cleverer that most of them but that &lit. is so often added to make a clue look better than it is. In this case, strictly speaking, shouldn't 'perhaps' be used to indicate that these are examples of the object defined?
2.
Six clues seemed to me to have that extra lift –
33 – 5 pts – real emotion there.
50 – 4 pts – it tells a believable story. That 'Tesco' formed a hidden word was especially nice.
5, 10, 23 and 30 – 1.5 points each
3.
A number of poor clues, too convoluted, trying too hard to be something they are not. A general observation, this week and also others – yes, maybe a lot of AZED comps are won by &lit clues. I suspect that an awful lot more are lost by people trying to create the same &lits and failing – and when they do fail, these clues can look awful.
clue 5 … don't anagrams normally contain all of the letters to be anagrammed?
7 poor anagram – what do we do with the 'S? And is performance a good anagrind?
9 makes little sense despite the long justification
12 hmmm!
15 I don't get – why is it &lit?
23 needs to be fifth of hearts, fourth of clubs etc which wrecks the clue
27 fail? – fails
28 what on earth is a semi &lit .. an attempted &lit which doesn't even get halfway there?
4.
I found the better clues in this selection difficult to separate, but in the end, my points are as below. All have excellent surfaces and the definitions are very fair – many of the other clues had definitions which seemed a little far-fetched.

Points to:
5 points : 33
3 points each to 25, 26 and 50.
1 point to 36

Honourable mentions to 13, 22, 23 and 42