The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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A clue to SPLASH.
17 comments were received for this competition (from 3 competitors, 1 other)

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Comments on the clues
1. A little salt and pepper, then beat
1.Surface reading is awkward.
2. Accompanying soprano, softly blow trumpet
1.Nice one, this should be on the premises if there's any justice.
4. Bathe in case of scotch after climbing mountains
1."in" is extraneous.
5. Beat the odds to take first place – you might do it when you enter the pool
1.Your surface reading is smoother than a politician's promise. Nice one.
10. Ed Davey's campaign for a headline (6)
1."Ed Davey's campaign" fairly weak definition and requires very specific, topical knowledge.
12. Hapless jerk loses heel of shoe in dash
1."in" is extraneous.
16. Impressive debut by British rock guitarist touring capital of Portugal (6)
1.He'd tour Europe, but play Lisbon. Nice though.
17. Just a little soda tops off port liqueur, adding something heavenly
1.More semi-&lit, not all of the clue could be said to define the word.
18. Lap's hard with small liquid quantity (6)
1.A semi is normally viable def + whole wp = stronger def. Not sure about this semi-demi &lit cop-out. Lap=lapping feels clumsy too.
21. Noise of a body falling into water ( 6 )
1.Seems very straight.
2.Where's the wordplay?
3.Not at all cryptic really.
23. Odds on Truss getting what bigger fish are making?
1.Amusing, and original definition.
24. Place in band for trumpet?
1.Economical and accurate, points from me.
28. Result of hapless swimming wasting energy?
1.Nicely done, points here.
30. Sensational story about president's wound (6)
1.Very topical.
39. Where Celtic plays football remains wet
1.Lovely surface, points here.