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Clue no. 70: Worried mum’s right about pride ultimately; it comes before a fall (6)

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A clue to SUMMER.
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Comments on the clue
1.Clever congruity with the proverb
2.Good surface, though beaten by some more concise ideas
3.Nice clue except for 'ultimately' being a bit obvious. Is 68 better?