The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 57: Sounds like death toll is concerning for Admiral Newton , overwhelmed by damage for future monarch (6 :6)

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A clue to NELSON / PRINCE (Right & Left).
4 comments refer to this clue (from 4 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Works better for me as "sounds like death toll is" for KNELL'S. But surface doen't seem very plausible, whichever Admiral Newton is meant.
2.Not a convincing surface
3.Nice idea, but I'm afraid "knell's on" doesn't sound like "Nelson". The former has a z; the latter, an s.
4.The Nelson clue on its own is very good