The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC January competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 16: Essentially cylindrical, one short pole holds flax at first (7)

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A clue to DISTAFF.
7 comments refer to this clue (from 7 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Cutting the pole and then adding that back to try and force an &lit seems a bit contrived
2.Needs to be "holding" for the &lit, and clueing part of the word (STAFF) separately doesn't really work.
3.Nice try at an & lit., but surface rather forced
4.Lovely clue except that 'holds' needs to be 'holding' to make the whole a nounal definition.
5.Nice try at &lit.
6.'Essentially' and 'at first' are both obvious indicators to be avoided if possible. Two in the same clue? Two too many!
7.Novel wordplay and well-disguised clue producing &lit.