CCCWC October competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 55

A clue to GLORIA.
3 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	I think the clue might be better without 'this' at the start – I'm not sure though – great clue either way.
2.	Cleverly constructed
3.	The ‘this’ doesn’t quite work here. Maybe ‘Song … heavenwards – this one?’