The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC June competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 20: Kim Jong's first meeting with heartless US president?

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A clue to UNION.
5 comments refer to this clue (from 5 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Nice idea, but 'Kim Jong's first' = U is too indirect
2.Is this anachronous or a different Kim Jong?
3.Doesn't quite work for me. Kim Jong's first does not equal U in my opinion – but I like the second half of the clue!
4.Def dubious?! A meeting but wouldn't call it a union
5.A nice idea but 'Kim Jong's first' = U is too indirect.