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A clue to UNION.
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1. Agreement zero in UN resolution
1.Let down by the nounal anagram indicator.
2. As a bit of fun I once swallowed a large pearl
1.But how is that fun? Have you tried swallowing a golf ball?
3. Bard's unique pearl: a remarkable non-u one.
1.I doubt many solvers would notice the 'uncultured' pun.
2.'Non-U' surely can't be used to refer to an uncultured pearl? Surface reading doesn't work
3."a remarkable" not really acceptable as an anagram indicator, the "a" being superfluous.
4. Bond in antimatter?
1.If you could answer this clue without five checking letters you could do the 'Listener' in three seconds
2.Clever thought , but is matter = ion ?
6. British leave: sore point for alliance
1.Nice, but for cryptic grammar it should be 'leaves' rather than 'leave'. 'Left' would have worked. 'Sore point' a bit too generic
2.Unfortunately the wordplay here is ungrammatical.
7. Cloth buffers taken off bunions.
1.I liked this but am not entirely convinced that 'cloth' and 'union' (via 'fabric') are synonyms.
8. Club champion returns to face one in France (5)
1.I feel 'champion' = NO 1 needs a question mark.
9. Combination without British corn (5)
1.A corn is not a bunion – ask anyone who’s had a bunion
2.Is there a specifically British corn? And what's it got to do with combination?
10. Compound noun with one coupling
1.27 is an improvement over this idea.
12. Could be Oxford University cricket side
1.Disallowed owing to partial definition ("This could be…" or "What could be…" required).
13. Endless innuendo destroyed marriage
1.Good one, on an equal footing with 14
2.Impossible to choose between this and 14, both with the same great idea.
3.I'm in two minds about whether this use of 'endless' is acceptable but the surface is so good I'll give it the benefit of the doubt.
14. Endless innuendo wrecked marriage
1.Good one, on an equal footing with 13
2.Great anagram spot, as with 13
3.I'm in two minds about whether this use of 'endless' is acceptable but the surface is so good I'll give it the benefit of the doubt.
15. Federation match (5)
1.The answer to this clue would be a piece of cake even for the Daily Mail
16. Federation of countries welcoming contentious region with love
1.Contentious region for NI is tricky.
2.If a federation of countries can be amatory are they not going a bit over the top?
3.Federation appears to do double duty here: 'countries' = UN is too loose.
17. Growth painful without British in Europe, say?
1.Painful growth acceptable, not the other way around, not unless there was a hyphen or comma after painful
2.Europe is a continent; EU is the union, but good surface.
3.Lovely. Reminds me of Sabre's 'sounds frightful?' for (I think) EEKS.
18. Head's beginning to go putting on uniform for meeting
1.Wouldn't he just go and put it on? How do you begin to go putting it on? Can you go to begin putting it on?
2.Surface reading is close but a little stilted.
19. It's used by plumbers working after leading parts of ugly new instllations
1.Spelling mistake, or typo
2.'Leading' is clever but the typo disqualifies the clue.
20. Kim Jong's first meeting with heartless US president?
1.Nice idea, but 'Kim Jong's first' = U is too indirect
2.Is this anachronous or a different Kim Jong?
3.Doesn't quite work for me. Kim Jong's first does not equal U in my opinion – but I like the second half of the clue!
4.Def dubious?! A meeting but wouldn't call it a union
5.A nice idea but 'Kim Jong's first' = U is too indirect.
21. Local one regularly disowns bard’s fine, large pearl
1.If this were a regular occurrence I think I'd eventually say it was mine just to stop people asking me stupid questions.
22. Marriage – anyone can see it might lead to tears if there's no love at the outset (5)
1.I think u changed the clue but not the explanation
24. Marriage little queen escapes: "No, I run away"
1.Wordplay is ungrammatical.
25. No fun essentially in arranged marriage (5)
1.Great! A Satyen clue?
2.Good idea, just pipped by a couple of the other anagrams
3.'Essentially' a bit hackneyed in a crossword clue but good surface reading.
4."Essentially" a bit weak, else really good clue
5.Good use of 'arranged marriage'.
26. No one in the audience knew about a basic operation in set theory
1.I don’t think the NU in NOINU has an accepted pronunciation
2.it's amazing just how many of us haven't a scooby about basic operations in set theory.
3.Indication of NU is a slight stretch but the rest is excellent.
27. Noun I mistake for conjunction.
1.The nounal 'mistake' isn't acceptable here as an anagram indicator.
28. Noun I work for? (5)
1.Slightly strange surface reading. How do you work for a noun?
2.A botched &lit, with 'for' superfluous in the cryptic reading.
29. Nun worried about perfect marriage (5)
1.Why is a nun worrying about marriage?
2.'perfect' = IO is too stretched.
30. Order wedding ring
1.Can’t see any evidence for union = order
2.Nearly brilliant but I can't justify 'Order' except possibly in the same sense as 'ring' which is then effectively a duplicate definition.
31. Partnership is swelling when opener is dismissed (5)
1.Nice idea but 'swelling' isn't quite good enough for the surface reading.
32. Partnership working after Cambridge, say.
1.Working AFTER Cambridge?
2.The best of the UNI + ON clues but this wordplay was too run-of-the-mill to merit points.
33. Peacekeepers keep nothing in the state of wedlock.
1.This looks like it needs another 'in' in the wordplay
2.What has the UN to do with wedlock, or is 'Wedlock' a country I've not heard of?
34. Pearl's a bit of a lump, but less tubby at heart
1.How can she be less tubby 'at heart'? bit too obvious as a middle letter indicator.
35. Pungent bulb loses head to take the first universal league (5)
1.What’s the surface supposed to mean?
2.Not sure what's intended by the surface reading here.
36. Red problem for Foot putting British off?
1.Can't see this as an &lit, sorry
2.Nice reference, but a bit weak as a def. of union
3.Nice idea, but "red problem" is a very weak definition for "bunion"
4.A good effort at an &lit and one of only two in this list (along with 47) that work.
37. Reduction of college term lost support of dons after getting together.
1.The wordplay is here is incoherent, e.g. 'support of' can't indicate the outer letters and 'after' is superfluous.
39. Sex gel court's banned
1.Clever and original
2.Simple and to the point with good surface reading
40. Some employees in university finding deduction from earnings acceptable
1.Lovely clue except "finding" a bit weak as a connector
41. Suffering ennui? That's ordinary for English marriage
1.Excellent
42. Topless fun makes leader return for sex (5)
1.'makes' is superfluous to the wordplay here.
43. Trinity Bursar reported having a swelling. Term didn't start.
1.Not keen on the indirect indication of (b)union
2.Who is Trinity Bursar?
45. Universal name of invocation and incorporation of federal states
1.Awkward surface reading
47. What could be reversed in Reno in urgency
1.Shouldn't that be WITH urgency or IN emergency?
2.Elegant &lit, comfortably the best here. However, I'm not totally convinced by 'could be' in the cryptic reading – it _is_ reversed!