CCCWC August competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 12

A clue to LAUGHTER.
4 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 1 other)

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Comments on the clue

1.	This is a lovely hidden clue. I was not keen on 'cackling' though, as 'cackling coca-cola' makes no sense to me.
2.	'Cackling' rather spoils the surface reading
3.	Rather meaningless
4.	Good hidden cryptic part but 'cackling is weak.