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1. A maker of music from Changes to Blue Jean across half a century |
1. | Clever. The clear winner! | 2. | A great opportunity well taken. | 3. | Lovely clue – for me, the winner by a distance | 4. | Superbly constructed – the winner for me | 5. | Beautiful – a standout winner | 6. | Much the best of the Bowie clues, though, not being a fan, I shouldn't have got the reference myself without the explanation |
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2. A mishmash of one unloved instrument with another (though not of this country) was a source of much consternation to Jeeves. |
1. | This is more etymology than wordplay, and the clue is awfully long. | 2. | No cryptic element. | 3. | Rather too wordy, but the reference is pleasing. |
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4. All bunjee jumpers got special little guitar (9) |
1. | 'jumpers' not a very sound anagram indicator. | 2. | Surface must be logical | 3. | Can not agree that jumpers is an anagrind. |
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5. All bunjee jumping is something that has strings attached! |
1. | I like this, though the non-standard spelling does signal the anagram strongly. | 2. | Excellent except for vague def | 3. | Good but for the very unusual spelling of bungee, which does not seem to exist in the wild | 4. | Surface must be logical |
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6. At hootenanny I'm often plucked from bar, drink unfinished, and led away finally |
1. | A little long, but very good surface and def. |
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8. "Blue Jean" played with long stringed instrument (9) |
1. | Why is long L? | 2. | …with U? |
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9. Blue jean worn over large string (9) |
1. | "String" is rather vague. Akin to "key" being "piano". |
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11. Contrived instrument to stop heartless French game, the French follow repeatedly (9) |
1. | surface must be logical |
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12. Curse around incomplete project the French left — it has strings attached |
1. | surface must be logical |
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13. Curse nearly half the invaders and the French – twice gut instrument. |
1. | surface must be logical |
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14. Curse this month: wellies needed regularly — and this, at music festival? |
1. | Not really lucky timing – if you look at previous months' answers you'll spot a pattern! | 2. | But it's being judged in August! |
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15. Elected leader, "Jane Bull", possible name for this plucky one? |
1. | I like the idea, but the wordplay needs 'possibly' rather than 'possible' I think. |
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16. Exclusion for half of July over two railway lines gutted music-maker |
1. | surface must be logical |
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17. Formby played this City State University, before the French, again. |
1. | Don't understand how city can equal BA? | 2. | Where is this city BA? |
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18. Formby regularly picked me to accompany him |
1. | Lovely definition but I'm never going to vote for a clue without supporting wordplay. Just a definition is less than half the job done |
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19. Formby used to be changeable around late June and most of July – stormy on the front, by George! (9) |
1. | Manipulation to get to the definition is really not on, I'm afraid. | 2. | I don't think this splitting of the definition gives the solver much of a chance | 3. | This has a very cluttered cryptic element. |
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20. Formby's capital instrument here? Feel jubilant, 'happy-go-lucky' when it is plucked |
1. | The definition and wordplay are muddled, but it's not & lit. | 2. | Don't understand how the wordplay works |
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22. Gambian funeral singer misses the gist – it sounds like George Formby! |
1. | surface must be logical |
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23. George Formby's instrument found at beginners English language evenings on outskirts of Gambian capital |
1. | surface must be logical |
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24. I’m small, but gutsy and instrumental in arranging the finale of the June Ball |
1. | Surface reading hangs together nicely. |
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27. Instrument used to veto the French twice after Johnson unites initially |
1. | surface must be logical |
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28. It has strings attached to stop the French guzzling nearly all the drink |
1. | surface must be logical |
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29. It requires a lot of pluck, all bunjee jumping! |
1. | Similarly to 5, the 'bunjee' spelling is a giveaway, but otherwise very good. | 2. | The need to incorporate "all" has unfortunately produced a surface that is unidiomatic. |
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30. It takes some pluck to play a Capital side, having lost the last three |
1. | About the best of the Banjul clues. |
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31. Jack unable to shift extremely large instrument |
1. | 5 points – very neat surface, concise, original, and possibly misleading with the "large instrument" bit. |
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32. Jean Lambert's blue cuckoo plucked by George Formby. |
1. | Those are some strange dreams you're having! | 2. | It could have happened if GF hadn't died in 1961! | 3. | Lambert for L is perfectly fine, if a little obscure. Good clue nonetheless. | 4. | What an inventive and refreshingly new clue! |
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33. Jubilee Line removes one busking without an instrument |
1. | Nice original idea. | 2. | Can you busk without aninstrument? | 3. | Strong entry but anag. ind. desperately obscure and in the wrong part of speech |
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34. June Bella tiptoeing through the tulips with stringed instrument similar to Tiny Tim's! (9) |
1. | I'm all for original indicators, but I don't think this works. |
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35. "Live without working all June?", one fretted |
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36. Modelling blue jeans, having to swap Small for Large may take some pluck? |
1. | There isn't really a definition of a noun here. | 2. | Nice clue, but beaten by strong competition this time. |
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37. Note able Julian Bream initially plays this a bit? No! |
1. | Good effort but just gets a bit clumsy. |
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38. Over half of jelly unable to explode, yet still heard in Mr Wu's Chinese Laundry in Limehouse |
1. | Surface story doesn't really convince. | 2. | Is this a Monty Python sketch? |
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39. Plucky old thing, Verne almost followed Newton into trouble |
1. | Bale = trouble is archaic which should be indicated in clue |
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40. Poison found in unfinished julep beside Latin stringed instrument. |
1. | The wordplay seems to be the wrong way round – this gets you to something like JULEPBANEL. | 2. | Container and contents appear to be confused. | 3. | Seems the wrong way round to me – "unfinished julep beside Latin" is "found in" "poison", not the other way round. |
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41. Producer of music – Blue Jean and, originally, Let's Dance |
1. | I'm tying this with 1 for top marks. Well done. | 2. | Blue Jean was always going to make a few appearances; to me this is the best of them. |
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42. Producing this small instrument you, it's said, shaped jelly bean, removing centre |
1. | "Producing this small instrument" does not yield def. |
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44. Swinging Blue Jeans cut short opener in Leeds to perform instrumental novelty item |
1. | Good idea but ends up a bit overlong. | 2. | TO PERFORM is redundant |
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46. Young French have a ball playing a musical instrument. (9) |
1. | No, I'm afraid indirect anagrams are a definite no-no. (And there's no need to shout!) | 2. | I DISAGREE. | 3. | If you need to write a defence of your wordplay, it's likely you're aware of its weakness. | 4. | Succinct and tres bon! |
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