The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 15: Frolicking seraglios readiness for action

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A clue to Any 8-letter “PEN” word (Penalty Shoot-out).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Nice idea but surface is a bit clunky.
2.The surface reading seems ungrammatical.