The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 3: A stout fellow's portion of taglioni brought on a cardiac arrest very shortly after

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A clue to LION-HEART.
6 comments refer to this clue (from 6 competitors, 0 others)

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1.I think "cardiac arrest very shortly" being "heart failure" minus "failure" is pushing it.
2.I can't see how 'a cardiac arrest very shortly' indicates 'heart'
3.Doesn't work very well for me. Which portion of taglioni? And difficult to get to Heart (even after the explanation!)
4.To be fair the solver requires some indication of which portion of taglioni, and the wordplay for 'heart' isn't clear.
5.Too imprecise (which portion of?)('c. arrest v.shortly'= heart??) = v. unfair to solvers. Besides, HF and CA are v different medical terms.
6.The wordplay is not precise enough here – 'portion of taglioni' too vague for lion and 'very shortly' cannot indicate subtraction of a word