The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC June competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 18: Even if he had kept in line and been without original sin, Faust would still have made such a dumb move.

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A clue to FAULT.
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Too wordy
2.21 words for a single letter substitution clue is OTT