The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 29: Mostly evade duty at sea

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A clue to DUVET DAY.
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Comments on the clue
1.If this is an &lit, the definition is wrong, because the evasion of duty doesn't have to be at sea. If not, where is the definition?
2.There may be a nautical term for shirking, but this isn't it
 
Comments on the competition
1.
'Evad(e) duty' and 'down time' are both good ideas, though duvet can't be defined by 'down' alone. Dave shirking duty is very neat wordplay, but harder to justify as a definition (who's Dave?). Some of the evaders (9, 29) have defined a verb rather than a noun. It's good to see a couple of misleading definitions amongst all the & lits, and 28 is the best of these.
2.
The definition was the trickiest part of this challenge and thus the trickiest to judge. This is a relatively recent coinage, and the dictionary authorities seem not to be in full agreement as to what precisely it means. There is unanimity that a duvet day is one agreed with the employer, and the majority states (a) that its purpose is to alleviate (genuine) stress and (b) that it is typically granted at short notice. Only Chambers (11th edition), in one of its whimsical definitions, suggests that the reason given by the employee is necessarily specious and that the employer knows this, but turns a blind eye. The OED, surely the ultimate authority on English usage, defines duvet day as “a paid day’s leave from work, granted at short notice for rest or recovery from stress, etc”. Nevertheless, a definition that picks up the full flavour of the Chambers definition must presumably be allowable, simply because Chambers, even in a minority, is our standard bible. On the other hand, a definition (eg, 1, 15, 30) along the lines simply of time-off is probably insufficient. It is clear too that a duvet day is (a) a noun and [b] an occasion and not the excuse given for taking it or even the act involved in taking it – which rules out, eg, 8, 9, 11, 14, 16, 19, 29, 31, 32, regardless of other considerations. More problematic is a definition (eg, 4, 5, 21, 28) that implies either that the reason given is not genuine or that the reason is the alleviation of stress, but does not state or imply that the employer’s agreement has been obtained. I decided to give the benefit of the doubt to these, if only because to exclude them would leave hardly any otherwise sound clues eligible for points. 4, however, was ruled out for me by the inadequacy of “Abandoning” as an a.i.; similarly, the definition in 41 is unexceptionable, but the a.i. is, unfortunately, fatally flawed by the little word “to”.

5 points: 6 This ticks all the boxes with respect to the (Chambers) definition. Some purists might object that a composite anagram should have an a.i. in only one half, but that seems unreasonable to me when the “redundancy” contributes to so neat a surface.

3 points each:

21 skillful wordplay, and the definition neatly side-steps the traps identified above

28 a refreshingly different approach, deftly done

2 points: 36 This cleverly achieves the element of employer’s permission, but sails perilously close to defining duvet day as an act rather than an occasion, though I think that the use of “This” just avoids the charge.

0.5 point each:

3, 17, 39 These deserve some recognition for their brevity, combined with the play on the word “down”.

24 This has the merit of neatly incorporating the idea of employer’s permission, but the use of the arbitrary “Dave” simply for the sake of the anagram is a weakness (in my own clue too!).