The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC May competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 30: Likely to erupt, as he's missed flights – because of this.

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A clue to VOLCANIC ASHES.
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Comments on the competition
1.
Whilst some clues had definitions that seemed far too weak, there were far more clues than usual that I wanted to award points to included: 6, 17, 25, 30, 32, 36, 37, 39, 42, 43, 44, 47, & 52.

Outstanding clues for me were: my favourite 44 concise, clever and a superb surface, 52 which will be appreciated by those who Googled 'Calicos Havens'
, 32 my second favourite and unbelievably brief, 36 my third place – loved the def here!
2.
Not an easy phrase to clue leading to quite a few tortuous anagrams and some dubious claims for &lit.

I liked 36, particularly for avoiding the anagram, plus air travel reference, although the definition does stretch it a bit.

Points also for 30 and 32, the latter of which I liked very much at first for its brevity, but on having another look, it doesn't quite work as a definition for me. Damn good effort though.
3.
Head and shoulders above the competition was 42, which combined sound and deft wordplay with an excellent surface – 5 points.

So many of the other promising clues were at least slightly unsound, inaccurate (eg, in 6, tuff is not the same thing as volcanic ashes for all that it is formed from them) or had forced and/or unconvincing surfaces. In my book, the best of the rest were

20, 50 – 1.5 points each

1, 4, 7, 15, 22, 23, 46 – 1 point each

30 had a clever basic idea, but was carelessly executed. Volcanic ashes are plural and thus can’t validly be represented by “this” – something like “owing to these” would have been accurate and conveyed the same sense. See also 33. 43 was also nearly very good, but the anagram is fatally flawed by the little word “to” – “They vanish ultimately into calces when dispersed”?