The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC February competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 54: Red biddy has Bubka doing somersaults!

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A clue to BABUSHKA.
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Comments on the competition
1.
One of the problems in judging this was deciding how precisely a Russian headscarf, or an elderly Russian lady, should be defined. Should it have a specific reference to Russia, or could it refer to any old lady or headscarf? My final decision was that those definitions that didn't point to Russia explicitly would be fine; however, if a definition (and not the surface) suggested a country other than Russia, I considered this too much of a logical leap. Example of this were 6, 19 and 30. 63 also fell into this category, I felt, but I must congratulate the contributor on the clue's surface. 7 was another that fell foul here, mostly because I can't be sure that Azeri people (speaking a Turkic language) would refer to such an item the same as a Russian (who speaks a Slavic language).

On the positive side, points to:

5: 35 – Gots the edge over 36 due to a smoother surface.
4: 36 – See above.
3: 29 – Clever defintions.
2: 62 – Indirect anagram is perhaps obscure, but it doesn't harm the clue much.
1: 38 – Good surface.

I should also give mentions to 4, 14, 18, 25 and 49, 53 and 54. 46 has an excellent surface, but I'm not sure Red is synonymous with Russia.
2.
Difficult word to clue, resulting in a number of rather strained efforts and several that were close but rejected for various reasons (37 was almost good but Chambers doesn't give the doll sense of babushka; likewise 5 but no need for 'initially', and 'deliver Hair cover' is a bit odd; in 24 'Barbara beginning' should be 'Barbara's beginning'; in 35 the definition is too vague).
1st= (4.5 points each): 4 ('not a' is a blemish where there are two a's), 54 (pity about the unnecessary exclam).
3rd= (2.5 points each): 9, 18
5th (1 point): 7 (an exotic Baku bash is rather an odd idea)