The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 12: Fiery device from a strange country in an extravagant tale.(5,6)

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Comments on the competition
1.
Some very unconvincing 'crosswordy' constructions (e.g. 5)and the odd horror like the indirect anagram in 12, but some good stuff among the dross. First prize to 46 — from Mr Tozer of Mr Moorey, I'm guessing. with the neat no 8 not far behind. Consolation prizes to 18,34, and 17 (nice anagram but I wasn't totally sure about the strength of the definition).
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When I started reading through I found the clues so uninspiring and crossed them off the list immediately, but then by the end there were so many that it was hard to choose between. Having such a choice of different clue words made it as hard to choose outright winners as it did to decide what to write a clue for in the first place. In the end I ended up spreading the marks between lots of the clues.

Some "nearly" good clues: 12 indirect anagram – why not say "strange land"?; 18 needs "convertED" to work; 25 uses straight definition of "candle" in clue; 35 needs "maybe" for "saloon"= "car" and maybe (shame because else my joint favourite clue); 36 "midriff" inadequate indicator for middle letters in my view; 37 what's "for" doing in wordplay? If it had read "…space traveller's to go by" without the "for" it would have been another excellent (joint favourite) clue.