CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 8

A clue to SPARROW/TITANIC (Right & Left).
3 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	too many breaks, especially one between the terms clued, and 'put' in the imperative doesn't work coming at the end
2.	Sail and row aren't the same thing
3.	Pelagornithid? :)