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A clue to GRANGER.
33 comments were received for this competition (from 5 competitors, 1 other)

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1. 60% shortfall in grain upset American farmer
1.Cream of the crop for me
2. American farmer called Euhrlich, at first, in central Zagreb
1.Who he?
4. American farmer’s grain covers stove
1.Cryptic grammar here is 'definition is fodder contains fodder'. Clash of verbs.
6. Breeder managed to cross horse and zebra frequently (7)
1.Doesn’t that indicate GG in RAN?
2.Words like frequently, unless used very carefully, spoil most clues
3.Pretty loose alt letters indication.
10. Cowboy US President holding guitar case without a pose
1.Indirect anagram?
2.Indirect anagram, far too many possibilities to work through.
11. Farm manager in big Range Rover
1.Neat, but beaten by some more interesting clues
13. Farmer George, the king, had bad blood
1.‘Had’ in the past tense doesn’t work in the cryptic reading unfortunately
2.The cryptic logic needs 'has' where the surface needs 'had'.
14. Farmer George, the king with madness
1.Very neat – well done
17. Farmhand grumbles with irritation chasing out some birds
1.I think the derivation of GR is a little tough on the solver here
20. Farming lobbyist in king's realm
1.US farming lobbyist would be fairer
21. Field appropriated by grain producer
1.Definition seems a bit indirect
23. Finer days being lost for good for one maintaining country house
1.Finer feels odd, both in surface and as an obvious synonym for grander.
24. Foremost girl called to join Potter in the last two episodes!
1.Dodgy G selection.
25. From… from time to time, Germaine Greer comes a cropper?
1.Nice disguise in def. Clever construction, but I don't like the indicator. The necessary repeated 'from' feels lumpy too.
2.Very nice
27. Gangster’s no saint, but with treatment and taking the right direction, he was able to play the part
1.Your def to dead actor to Granger is a big ask. Combined with (overwordy) complicated WP I think this is impossible.
28. Germaine Greer, oddly, is country housekeeper!
1.Well spotted! Not totally convinced by the rather vague definition though
29. Golf practice area right for a growing pro (7)
1.Nice defintion
30. Good-for-nothing, faked-tanned Republican's landed party in a state
1.Very good – clever wordplay and well-disguised definition
32. Greek hugs unloved fruit farmer (7)
1.Nice O deletion and hidden join.
33. Hermione expressed gross outrage.
1.What's the function of expressed?
34. Hermione, for one, vacated Gryffindor with indignation
1.Best of the Hermiones for me
2.Best of the Hermione genre
38. I left grain and grass, even radish tops for the stockman
1.A charming tale – if a little random?
39. More rum's good for extremely smart farmer
1.The randomness of the story is letting things down I think
46. Tiller Girl managed country briefly
1.Great surface and disguise but I’m not convinced by the definition
2.Hinting at dear departed Betty Boothroyd?
48. Who’s garnering crop in ground?
1.Imperative deletion between fodder and anagram indicator doesn't work.
2.Would crops be a better indicator ?