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1. Bit of manifesto Tories lop off to motivate the City |
1. | Not sure about 'bit of', nor 'motivate' | 2. | Is "to motivate" the wordplay-definition link? | 3. | Role of to motivate” is unclear |
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2. Bonn? Berlin? Or Fritz's masterpiece? |
1. | No chance of misdirection just with 3 cities |
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3. Caddy, carry them back to the city. |
1. | I suppose it's possible. |
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4. Can we describe Lazio’s capital? “Sì, potremo!” |
1. | Lazio may be a capital, but not Lazio's capital! |
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5. City beaten 1-0, prem lost |
1. | Would anyone actually say prem for Premier League? |
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6. City close to pandemonium with poorest and ill almost rioting |
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7. City in Middle East erected storage for food and wine (10) |
1. | Very nicely constructed |
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8. City is unfortunately more spoilt (9) |
1. | Simple but seen before; hence no wow! factor |
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9. City is withdrawing missile store and dock after early stages of meeting |
1. | I can see how a missile store might be withdrawn, but not a dock. |
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10. City playing opener at Manchester United with Oriel tops |
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11. City police or blended Glaswegian police |
1. | MET is from metropolitan and POLIS is from police, shared etymology with metropolis | 2. | Blended police?? |
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12. City's public transit incomplete, like Warsaw |
1. | Surface reading needs like Warsaw's. |
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13. Crowded city spoilt Rome unfortunately |
1. | The anagram is familiar; lacks wow! factor |
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14. Early brace from Messi – Arsenal left needing a comeback in London? |
1. | I really liked this idea and would have scored more except silo and arsenal do not seem to me to be very similar |
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17. Fiery character facing mortal peril, Superman's heading over to ——— |
1. | A nice subsidiary part to this clue. |
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18. First show of movie spoiler to ruin science fiction film |
1. | Clever with a good misleading surface. | 2. | How does the anag indicator work? It looks to me like a noun, with no relationship established between it and the fodder |
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21. I’m poor .. let’s move to a big city
(10) |
1. | Not entirely happy with 'move', though I'm still giving points to this one. | 2. | Move doesn’t seem to work as anagrind after the fodder | 3. | My favourite, a smooth convincing surface |
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22. Implores top doctor to remove head of pustule to get at sprawling area of growth |
1. | Doctor [fodder] or [fodder] doctored? | 2. | Doctor, as an imperative, needs to come before the words to be doctored in order to work as an anag indicator. |
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23. Lane assignment or milepost arrangement |
1. | Very nice misdirection. |
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24. Large settlement secured after more pilots came out |
1. | Great definition | 2. | I'll take the elaborate causal link. Anag indicator is weird though. Almost as though you're trying to find a passive for to come. |
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25. Maybe Paris Hilton stripped as part of some PR stunt (10) |
1. | Love the surface! Not sure about the wordplay though. | 2. | Nounal anagrind ? | 3. | Likeable clue but not entirely convinced that 'stunt' as an anagrind works here. | 4. | As part of seems to have only a decorative role in the clue. |
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27. Middle Eastern port sent back crude oil to southern city |
1. | Not sure about 'to' | 2. | ME is not Middle Eastern – just Middle East |
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28. Motors pile up, and so I'm petrol hybrid in London eg |
1. | eg at the end is quite clumsy. And you don't really get good surface mileage out of the double wordplay idea. |
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31. Poms loiter about in Melbourne, Sydney etc |
1. | Shouldn't the definition be 'Melbourne or Sydney etc'? | 2. | To me, etc implies a plural "Sydney, perhaps" would have been fine |
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33. Promise to treat large investment as capital? |
1. | Treat [fodder] or [fodder] treated? Nice definition. | 2. | I think it would need to be 'treated'? | 3. | Treat doesn't work after the fodder |
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34. Promise to wander around large city (10) |
1. | would need to be wanders / wandering |
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35. Put away drink then dash back to London for one (10) |
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38. Rome – its people periodically rebuilt the ancient city (10) |
1. | A nice classical touch. | 2. | replacing "the ancient city" with "it?" (referring back to Rome) would make this a nice semi-&lit |
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41. See list with poor cluing, yours truly coming first? |
1. | This took some time to crack, but when the penny (eventually) dropped I liked it a lot. Beaming grin here! | 2. | where's the definition? | 3. | Chancy anag indicator. You'll have to get there without my help |
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42. Setter managing solo trip to Superman's hometown |
1. | To doesn't really work as a link does it? |
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44. Shot pistol more to produce the smoke? (10) |
1. | Nice unusual definition |
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45. Spatiotemporal rules run amok to make this mother country supernatural. |
1. | Please tell me that a computer helps find these compound anagrams. | 2. | That's some anagram! | 3. | ! | 4. | By adding enough letters anything can be an anagram of anything, but is it fun to solve? |
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48. Superman's heart to melt with Lois here? |
1. | He's got a big heart, that Superman |
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