CCCWC November competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 28

A clue to SOUSAPHONE.
3 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	Not the most convincing surface!
2.	Surface rather forced, and I’m not sure a sousaphone is very melodic
3.	First half of this is inspired, but would prefer if story was less zany and more musical