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A clue to CAESAREAN.
61 comments were received for this competition (from 7 competitors, 1 other)
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Comments on the competition
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A word which provided a good number of different clueing options and invited and received some innovative entries. I particularly liked some of the clever cryptic definitions which offered a departure from the usual anagram possibilities. As always, I excluded clues which failed to provide a convincing surface story and any where the cryptic grammar was suspect including use of nounal anagrinds. I also thought the definition should indicate something more than just 'delivery'. Even so, it was not easy to decide the very best from a number of very good entries.
 
Comments on the clues
1. A case near Barking demanding delivery for medical reasons (9)
1.Role of “demanding “ is unclear . Doesn’t seem to work as a valid connector
2.Nicely constructed anagram clue
3.Good straightforward wordplay and disguised definition.
2. A sane care arrangement for the end of pregnancy?
1.A bit forced, this anagram
4. A scare under the knife? Have kittens! (9)
1.Nearly made it for me, a pity 'ean' is so obscure
2.‘Ean’ is a bit too obscure with no indication that it’s obsolete
3.Part of speech mismatch in definition. The idea is captured, but without precision.
5. A section's appearance, with pages redacted, is deceptive
1."Section" cannot be both definition and wordplay element unless clue is & lit.
2.Not keen on the way the S is added to the anagram
3.Evil split between def & fodder. Solver encouraged to assume cryptic reading error (is..is), which is, one might say, deceptive. Nice one.
6. A way to bear territory, through rocky edges of Caspian Sea
1.A nice definition, but in the surface 'bear territory' sounds wrong
2.Surface maybe implausible but an original idea
7. After the Emperor’s appearances, Pontius Pilate initially retired to give order
1.A good anagram and deletion, the anagrind lets it down a bit
8. An operation can erase a wrinkle (9)
1.A nice smooth clue but 'wrinkle' seems a bit dubious as anagrind
2.Very neatly done. Surprised no one else (me included) spotted this.
9. Arrest Aryan as stated by procedure
1.Doesn’t seem to work as a homophone
10. Arriving via short-cut over viaduct.
1.Nice cryptic definition couple
2.Repeating via signals L&S neatly. Hyphen wrong: verb only, both readings want modified cut. QM would help. Arriving(noun?) an awkward def.
12. Australia's opener occupying crease undone by an incisive delivery
1.Excellent linkage between definition and indicators
2.A nice deceptive clue but whilst 'occupying crease' is necessary for the cryptic wordplay, it makes the surface story less smooth.
13. Chances are a child is delivered unnaturally this way !
1.Clever wordplay, but 'delivered' doesn't really work as a deletion indicator
2.Like the construction
3.The ‘is’ spoils the wordplay.
14. Cut delivery from small district in French city
1.Nice use of Caen
15. Cutting out delivery can ease supply around Arkansas
1.Hmmm cutting delivery is not likely to ease supply!
17. Delivery of cosmetic case and belt by noon (9)
1.I think 'cosmetic' as an anagram indicator is a stretch too far
19. Delivery sent over Dele Alli’s head is caught by excellent keeper (9)
1.Explanation too complicated
21. Endless seances are an absurd theatrical act to reach loved ones on ‘the other side’
1.Imaginative, I like "theatrical act" but think the full definition is a step too far
2.Definition is overstretched, but a merit for effort.
22. Excitement and new beginnings after invasive general surgery?
1.Different approach, although there may be a good number of invasive generals who fit the description.
23. Fast delivery for those expecting a special bundle
1.I like this
24. Fired as a cleaner, having left out section in hospital
1.One of the best anagram ideas
25. Former Italian prison has a blackout setback.
1.Erase = black out — not blackout
26. Give birth to the noblest Roman? On the contrary this section, paradoxically, was the most kindest cut of all
1.Too long all round!
2.Double superlative in clue .l’ve not seen anything as illiterate as this for a while
27. How Aurelia might have given birth? (9)
1.Not really a cryptic clue
2.Not really a cryptic clue
28. How one's delivered treatment of areas with acne?
1.Nice definition but sounds a bit forced
2.Definition and wordplay seamlessly combined
29. Imperial Guard revealed by crones in unspoken play to hold fatal loophole?
1.The second def isn't for "Caesarean" as "fatal loophole" is not the subject. It's also too oblique.
2.Too many steps required for what’s mostly a cryptic def.
32. Incisive delivery cut back with a nick carrying
1.Surface doesn’t mean much to me, but hopefully makes cricketing sense.
34. Kind of debut theatre performance that leaves one in stitches
1.Excellent deceptive wordplay – challenging but fair. My winner.
36. Labour's replacement leader of course heralds a new sane era (9)
1.Great def., but not sure about ‘heralds’
37. Labour-saving device for those with children?
1.'With child' in the explanation is better than 'with children' in the clue
2.Nice try but not sure the with child = pregnant carries over to the plural.
39. May enter directions to neighbourhood for special delivery
1.“To” spoils the cryptic reading.
40. “New Arrivals” section (9)
1.Brief but effective.
42. Opener for Australia inside batting crease, facing an unorthodox delivery
1.'Bat' [(vt) to flutter] would need to be intransitive for 'batting' to work as the anagrind here. What a pity!
2.Nice idea, but not as smooth as 12
3.Excellent, especially “batting”
4.I think something can be batted but it can’t bat by itself.
44. Organising a sea crane for extraction operation
1.Straightforward good clue with different but credible surface story.
46. Second batsman stuck in crease, confused by an awkward delivery
1.Second batsman ≠ second of batsman
47. Section cut from northern end of old Israeli seaport
1.I can’t see how ‘northern end of’ means ‘ending with northern’.
54. This French saree is styled with an untimely rip
1.“Ça” is usually translated as “that”
55. This may help to release one enduring hard labour.
1.A deceptive different 'take' and very good clue.
57. Treat a case again with a new surgical procedure (9)
1.I don’t think “re-” indicates “again”
58. What's to be done, when a babe won't come out?
1.One of the few that raised a smile :)
2.Amusing and different.