The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 25: Reading gaol inmate admitting damage from instrument of torture

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A clue to WILD MARE.
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Comments on the competition
1.
There was less scope for inventive definitions and wordplay this month, and I felt the overall standard wasn't that high. The top five of a dozen or so honorable exceptions were 8 and 41 with good & lit. treatments, 19 (though saddled=mounted is dubious) and 42 for misleading definitions, and 25 for the disguised Wilde reference. Some tortuous wordplay was evident, e.g. in 1 and 37 where the definition was obscured by a homophone, and more so 15 with the multi-step anagram of (HE=MALE=MAIL + MARRIED=WED + 18th=R). Unsolvable I think. I wasn't keen on 16's lack of capitals and punctuation.
2.
It seemed to me that unsoundness abounded this month, including several indirect anagrams (e.g. 15,17) and inadequate definitions. On top of this there were many clues with wordplay using related definitions of "wild", which made the clues rather weak, and some unnatural surface readings.

I chose 19 and 25 as my top two clues, although both could also be considered flawed. "From" in 25 is used in the opposite way from convention – i.e. it states "wordplay" from "definition" rather than the other way round. In 19 the definition is a little weak, I think, and "one" superfluous to the wordplay, unless I've missed something. But I liked the surface readings and construction of these two above any of the other clues.