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A clue to FURPHY.
76 comments were received for this competition (from 11 competitors, 1 other)

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Comments on the competition
1.
Surprised to discover a transsexual potato and surprised to find only a single & lit.
2.
Some very nice clues but surely they all need an Australian indicator
3.
In composing clues for cryptic crosswords generally, I think it's best to avoid obscure references to people who may not be known to a majority of solvers. This applies to places as well. For example, in the clues submitted, I had never heard of a football manager called Furphy, L.Frank Baum, or a Tiger Electronics Toy called Furby.

Considering it was a difficult word to clue, I was pleased that so many members tackled it.
 
Comments on the clues
1. A divine angry woman seen in the pub? On the contrary, it's just a rumour
1.Surely the cryptic construction clues PFURYH?
2.Very nice, but doesn't this need an Australian indicator?
2. A kite made oddly of four ropes – they don't need seven.
1.Kite is at best an example of furphy, and S for 7 needs some qualification I think.
2.I can't find any reference to kite meaning furphy anywhere.
3.The 'seven' part is clumsy.
3. A scandal is, for example, King Edward giving up crown for female.
1.I like the potato joke
2.I would have preferred 'e.g.' in place of 'for example' to avoid that intrusive first comma – otherwise excellent.
3.The best of the potato clues, but start a bit clunky & a pity, from the point of view of the surface, about the necessary "for example".
4. All I deliver is water – pub's in uproar
1.Neat
5. Anger about acidity level gives rise to false report.
1.I don't really get the surface!
6. Anger about President finishing with truth, offering this?
1.'Finishing with' doesn't mean 'the finish of'
2.The "finishing" is doing double work here – it can't apply to both the "President" and the "truth"
8. Aussie breeze: beginnings of fresh upwinds right in middle of zephyrs.
1.Breeze nice obscure def. but rest is a bit contrived.
2.A foehn clue!
9. Australian beer? Bull caca!(6)
1.I can't see how 'beer' works as a def.
2.I don't understand this at all!
3.Eh?
10. Darfur physicians smuggling rumour
1.There's probably a better indicator than 'smuggling' – 'suppressing' maybe?
2.Nice try at hidden def. but doesnt' really read convincingly.
11. Fake news charge reportedly laid against Fox coverage
1.Coverage doesn't mean covering, and the homophone is not quite exact – but an excellent effort deserving of a point.
2.I like the misleading wordplay
3.The smartest clue, though it ducks indicating the Aussie-ism (which I feel this word really needs)
4.Worth a point for topicality, but fox coverage is pushing it bit far!
5.Not sure that fox coverage = fur.
12. Finally Trump concludes speech in rage! Aussies can't believe it
1.Nice clue but not sure "concludes speech" for H is grammatically correct
2.Concludes speech isn't good indicator for'h'
14. Force starts with utterly ruthless Putin and ends with much utterly fake news
1."Starts" can't do double work.
16. Fury surrounding philistine leaders? It's fake news!
1.Using a synonym for 'fury' would improve this clue
2.I reckon you could have used a synonym for fury.
18. Harbouring a degree of sourness, vengeful woman creates rumour
1.I struggle a little with "degree of sourness" for pH.
2.I have never tasted nitric acid but it probably is quite sour
20. Initially feeding us rumour, presidential hysteria yields fake news (6)
1.Is the "yields" doing double work here?
21. Invention of digger unearthed transsexual potato
1.Nice definition, bizarre surface
2.Not sure "transsexual" is a fair indicator of switching F for M. Neat clue (the use of digger is nicely deceptive) though.
3.'transsexual potato'?!! – I had to laugh!
22. It is rumored that this Tiger Electronics toy uses polynomial hierarchy for its brain. (6)
1.Def. of Furby is a bit obscure
2."polynomial hierarchy" = PH? I think this needs a first-letters indicator.
3.Can't see how 'brain' = B
4.I remember Furby!
24. Leaders of pro-Jacobite Highlanders, overcome by violence, lie in Perth
1.Not sure it's a lie exactly, but this is a good clue
25. Maybe Victoria's water cart is a thing that doesn’t hold water?
1.Best of the double defs
2.A clever way to link the two definitions.
3.Different.
4.Excellent idea, but, e.g., "Victoria's water cart? It doesn't hold water!" would have been crisper.
26. Melbourne's story about animal covering local filly at the back
1.The "about" is completely superfluous and very misleading – pity as would have been in the points otherwise
27. Origins of far-fetched urban rumour, possibly hydrating you?
1.This one's grown on me: makes an obscure word solvable (trivially so!) and would raise a smile on checking the word in a dictionary
28. Outrage about possible human origins seen in Darwin's incredible report
1.Nice use of Darwin to deceive in the surface.
2.Good clue – personally not keen on noun indicators but they seem to be more and more accepted
3.VG combination of surface & definition, but indicator of first letters hard to accept. Eg, "origins of primitive humans" wd be sounder.
29. Outrage over litmus test results in fake news
1.Unfortunately 5 has the same idea with better surface
30. Oz rumour mill tip has young upper class Romeo following prince.
1.you need a hyphen in "upper-class" for the cryptic construction to work.
31. Phoney one down under-fell for this?
1.I feel fell for fur is a bit of a stretch (fell^4 in C. lists "a skin; a membrane; a covering of rough hair." Still worth points though!
33. Rumour comic Eddie's to have a sex-change
1.Nice misleading ref. to transvestite comic Eddie Izzard.
2.The best of the F/MURPHY clues
3.Nice – prefer clues that indicate the Aus-ism though
34. Rumour from Oz: King Edward could be undergoing sex change
1.King Edward = potato = Murphy a hop too far for me. 33 delivers the same idea more smoothly
36. Rumour of fine potato crop (6)
1.A very successful and neat little clue.
2.Admirably succinct, but I find the imperative use of "crop" following the word to be shortened hard to accept.
37. Rumour raging round outskirts of Perth?
1.A neat & lit.
2.A fine go at an &lit.
3.Excellent &lit, even if not claimed. "raging" = "fury" bold, but just acceptable.
38. Rumour says the Australian stole the first half of the rubber.
1.Nice surface but the indication of 'phy' is hard to solve
40. Rumour you heard – bit of fluff's going round with royal – Prince Harry's gutted (6)
1.I'm with Azed on Royal indicate R (see slip no 2031) – it isn't listed in Chambers. Shame because I enjoyed the clue otherwise.
2.Homophones for parts of words are generally frowned upon.
41. Sydney's unreliable accounts hide charge for auditor
1.Clever use of the two definitions of "auditor". I enjoyed this clue very much.
2.Nicely disguised.
42. This football manager also carried the water (6)
1.The football reference is a bit too pub quiz for me
2.Reference too obscure for me, shame as clue is a nice one
3.Far too obscure GK
4.The football reference is a bit obscure
46. Word game for married female (6)
1.Murphy's game is a game but Murphy isn't
2.I hardly think "word" is a fair definition!
3.Falling into the 'cashmere goat' trap here – Murphy is not a game, 'Murphy's game' is.