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A clue to TECHNOJUNKIE.
159 comments were received for this competition (from 14 competitors, 1 other)
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Comments on the competition
1.
I couldn't find any clues that stood out this time, so I've distributed my points more widely than usual. It's a shame both the 'Union Jack' clues assume 'E' = 'Europe', when Chambers gives only 'European'.
2.
I found this a tough word to clue, and it looks like I wasn't the only one. As ever, though, there were some good ideas I wish I'd spotted.
3.
I thought 27 was absolutely inspired notwithstanding the slightly dodgy DS/tec element in the clue
 
Comments on the clues
1. A fetiche lacking feet; stumbles, possessing no junk. What a geek!
1.I think that 'no junk' is too long (half the clued word) to include as part of the clue.
2.'A' redundant; can't find fetiche in Chambers or OED; 'junk' used as is. Not competitive enough
3.Definition is anaccurate, surface reading should really avoid 'junk' and 'stumbles' isn't really an anagram indicator.
2. A loud denial that Sherlock uses opium? Actually, he can't get enough of it!
1.No marks from me to any entry that clues "junkie" in its direct meaning of "addict". Decapitalisation of IT an issue too.
2.Too obscure wordplay and can 'it' = 'IT'?
3.A good idea, but 'it' does not equal 'IT'
4.Nice homophone, but "it" is not "IT"
5.A stretch to arrive at this through the homophone; IT does need capitalisation
6.Wordplay seems a bit hit and miss to be fair and definition as intended seems too narrow – IT should be capitalised in any case.
3. Addict rolled joint unchecked almost, not having cocaine.
1.3 Removal of arbitrary letters indicated just by "almost" is weak.
2.Unfortunately I think the clue needs more of a definition than 'addict'.
3.Def doesn't really get you there
4.Surface reading seems a little strained and definition really needs to specify subject of addiction.
4. Addict who craves more and more speed?
1.I liked this one because it was indeed cryptic and so succinct
2.Could be other things, e.g. a car enthusiast or adrenaline junkie
3.Succint, but I'm not sure it works as a wordplay + def or a double def clue?
4.I don't think a solver could be reasonably expected to get this.
5.Def a bit inadequate I feel
6.Why speed ?
5. An innovator in spirit Juncker mostly has a drop of Haig last thing at night – i.e. no Horlicks (12)
1.Unsolvable, surely – a one-way journey by the setter from solution to clue
2.Horlicks = anagram indicator?
3.Incongruous surface
4.'Horlicks' isn't really an anagram indicator, wordplay requires 'in night' and definition seems imprecise.
6. As pollster with all the latest gadgets, perhaps, initially judging UK in the EC? No, out!
1.EC is not really an alternative name for EU, sorry (EC is now European Commission)
2.Why 'pollster'?
3.Topical, but where does 'pollster' come into it?
4.Role of 'pollster' in the definition? Seems to be there only for surface
5.Nice try at a topical surface, but 'Pollster' seems to be padding that confuses the definition.
7. Being into computers, would he notice glitch after input of garbage?
1.I get the anagram indicator (would XYZ glitch?) but to call a technojunkie a "being (who is) into computers" is a bit strange
2.'would' needed for surface reading but spoils the cryptic element.
3.I can't find any evidence of 'glitch' as a verb.
4."Would" doesn't seem to fit
5.'would' is intrusive
6.Definition seems too narrow, 'would' is superfluous to wordplay and 'glitch' isn't an anagram indicator.
8. Chuck entertained by music that's obsessive
1.Can't really abbreviate "that is" to "that's" in this sense.
2.Unfortunately I think the clue needs more of a definition than 'obsessive'.
3.def doesn't seem to unequivocally lead to the required answer
4.Wordplay requires 'that is' (see clue 9) and definition is too vague.
9. Computer fan that is installed at end of houseboat.
1.Nice play on (electric) fan, though the required "house/boat" split is probably unfair
2.Why would a computer fan be installed in a houseboat?
3.Surface seems a little unlikely
4.One might install a fan, but a computer fan? And to lift and separate 'houseboat' for what is required here seems way too challenging
5.Definition seems too narrow, wordplay as intended requires a space between 'house' and 'boat' and surface seems rather arbitrary.
6.Houseboat is one word.
10. Computer freak has irregularity: unjoint cheek (12)
1.Poor surface reading doesn't really make sense.
2.Avoid strange phrases like "unjoint cheek" – they are obvious anagram fodder
3.'has irregularity' as anagram indicator preceding the fodder doesn't work for me
4.Definition requires 'for example', anagram indicator should be 'irregularly' or '(is) irregular'.
11. Computer geek found distasteful ethnic joke about headless nun.
1.The surface reading is good but the link word 'found' jars
2.Can't see how distasteful indicates anagram
3.Works, but surface doesn't excite
4.Definition requires 'for example', surface seems strained and linkword requires the sense of 'from' (definition from wordplay).
12. Cop ransacked john, uncovered "comparatively malodorous" individual hooked on tablets, etc.
1.I liked this one but would have had trouble getting 'UNKIE' from the 'obs or US dialect' usage
2.Nice use of 'tablets'
3.Surface seems a bit contrived
4.A colourful surface but the wordplay is rather challenging and is 'tablets etc' a fair definition of the latest technology ?
5.12 "hooked on tablets" is a wonderfully distracting definition.
13. Digital-Age addict is high on ecstasy, THC, heroin, and meth (but not cocaine)
1.Wow, are you a pusher?
2.13 Why is "high" an anagram indicator?
3.One of the better clues, but Digital-Age doesn't really fit.
4.Plenty of drug references this month, this is my favourite of these.
5.Wordplay is far too complex to be fair to the solver.
14. Disarray in the UK once Johnson's premier? I'm obsessed with it from a capital perspective!
1.Pity about noun-before-fodder "disarray" when an -ing word ("wrangling"?) would have been stricter
2.Very good wordplay; shame about the definition.
3.Another nicely topical surface but needs 'Johnson's leader' for J and the definition as intended seems too narrow.
15. Entice UK John Hop to be an addict. (12)
1.15 Addict for what? "Techno" is there in the cryptic part but not in the definition.
2.def a bit weak, could be any addict
3.'Hop' isn't really an anagram indicator and the definition really needs to specify subject of addiction.
4.Great clue using JH!
16. Fly the Union Jack over Europe, though not a fan of recent developments.
1.Great effort, but none of the major dictionaries gives E = Europe as an abbreviation (Chambers has E = European)
2.Not sure about 'fly' before the fodder as anag ind but still prefer it to my similar effort
3.Shame about the full stop, but even so this is by some distance the best clue here. I wish I'd seen the Union Jack anagram.
4.E = European not Europe?
5.I like the surface, but E = European, not Europe.
6.Good surface reading though 'wave' might be a better anagram indicator.
7.16 "recent developments" is very broad for clueing technology
17. Gadget freak programmer claims to be a health nut at heart!
1.Big ask of the solver to get "NO JUNK" from "claims to be a health nut"
2."health nut" to "no junk" is too big a stretch for me.
3.Cryptic element too vague
4.'to be' seems ungrammatical in the required syntax; also a bit of a stretch to arrive at the solution
5.Wordplay seems rather awkward (why the exclamation?) and surface reading a bit arbitrary.
18. Garbage music that's written by IT Poindexter ? (12)
1.Wordplay requires 'that is' (see clue 9) but not 'written by' and definition by example seems inaccurate.
19. Geek decoded the "Coke" in about a month (12)
1.'the Coke'?
2.Surface as intended seems obscure and definition inaccurate.
20. Geek's notice, he deciphers, contains spam
1.Strange surface and don't quite agree with 'deciphers' as anagram indicator
2.Wordplay requires 'deciphered', definition not accurate.
21. HE CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF IT!
1.No wordplay, so nul points for effort I'm afraid.
2.Caps trick does more harm than good
3.Doesn't uniquely point to the required solution, could choose from a bunch of alternatives
4.Why the disguise, it just makes the clue less fair (see clue 32) – definition requires 'for example'.
22. Heck! June and time for travelling? 'No' for me, I'm glued to my screen!
1.Good effort, but 'not for me' would be more natural than 'no for me'
2.The definition seems inaccurate and does 'travelling' really convey rearrangement ?
23. He's used every device to rid the Union Jack of a crumbling Europe
1.Nice but sadly I fear 'a crumbling England might have been politically more appropriate :)
2.Anagram element is split
3.Like 16, this clue assumes E = Europe, for which I can find no justification.
4.Nice, but I just found 16 to be smoother. Still gets points, though.
5.The surface would probably make more sense the other way around. Merit
6.Wordplay isn't quite grammatical and surface reading lacks coherence.
24. "I'M LOVIN' IT!" Notice he's nuts about food from McDonald's?
1.Flawless and ticklish clue that would be huge fun to solve – really well done!
2.The most natural of the attempts to get round the IT capitalisation problem, and a well worked surface
3.'I'm lovin' IT' would be a fairer definition as intended (see clue 32), but it really needs 'for example' too.
25. 'I'm not addicted,' the narc insists. 'It's just a little smack.' He most certainly is!
1.I don't understand this even after reading the explanation!
2.Most of the pieces of a clue are here, but they're in the wrong order.
3.Parsing doesn't seem to add up for the required sequence, and lots of extraneous stuff
4.The definition seems inadequate and the wordplay rather convoluted.
26. In the end, dead clear: jock, mad about computers essentially
1.Def. rather narrow and doesn't need first 5 words, 'dead clear' for 'clear of dead' seems awkward, 'essentially' should be 'at heart'.
27. In-joke leads to his name unaccountably being replaced by DS Mac nut?
1.Can't resist giving this in-joke points
2.Not excited with the surface
3.The obscurity of wordplay and vagueness of definition aren't really justified by the odd surface reading.
28. iPhone user?
1.Not very cryptic.
2.No clue as to what the solver is to look for
3.I don't think a solver could be reasonably expected to get this.
4.Would need a fair bit of imagination to get to the answer
5.Why iPhone ? Lacking in wordplay for 'techno' and an accurate definition.
29. Jobs, maybe, after college? That's to follow, no nonsense.
1.Wordplay requires 'that is' (see clue 9), surface reading seems a little awkward.
30. Jobs, presumably, break the ice without spinning on heroin
1.should be 'breaks' to be grammatically consistent?
2.The definition and wordplay don't really gel to form a smooth surface reading.
31. John, Kat, and Eunice are mad – not one loony about gizmos, widgets, and such.
1.Construction seems a little forced
2.Who are these persons?
3.Definition seems to indicate an adjective and doesn't really form a smooth surface with the wordplay.
32. "Junk it!", he once cracked; now he is obsessed with IT.
1.Delightful clue and the surface reading flows smoothly.
2.Definition requires 'perhaps' perhaps and the surface reading seems a bit clunky.
33. Lament of marooned old Chinese salt when hemmed in by ice? The silly geek
1.I don't think a solver could be reasonably expected to get this.
2.No logical connection that I could spot
3.33 "salt" suggests sailor not boat.
34. Maybe fry in nice hot June – around the 11th.
1.A nice clue except that (Stephen) Fry must have a capital F. "Fry maybe …" would have worked!
2.Fry needs a capital.
3.Would expect 'Fry' to be capitalised in this case; 'around' doing double duty apparently
35. Modelling Nike, John's cute – he's always after new gear
1.'Modelling Nike, John has cute' makes no sense.
2.s of John's redundant
3.apostrophe s in the middle of the fodder doesn't work very well
36. Nice Hunt joke broadcast? I just love IT!
1.Good spot for the anagram; I think the definition is a bit weak though.
37. niche nut joke cracked up obsessive gadget geek
1.Surface seems strange, what is 'nut joke'?
38. Notice and gutlessly judge hunk working – an IT nerd
1.Just words strung together, can't figure out what is 'gutlessly judge' which is only used for letter selection
39. Notice he is wrong about discarded goods, and he is no Luddite
1.Nothing wrong with the wordplay, but I'm not convinced by the surface story.
2.Definition not quite on the money
40. Novelty fan blown on juice then put in cocktail (12)
1.Cocktail = K? No thanks.
41. O June, kitchen's a mess — because of all those gadgets I bought?
1.The random name and the conspicuous O make this seem slightly contrived
2.'O' is rather poetic and doesn't seem to fit the context, nor is the definition very relevant
42. One craving latest wizardry makes JK continue her novel (not Rowling's first)
1.'wizardry' is not quite the right terminology?
2.Well done and refreshingly novel approach
44. School without heroin, as example, produces computer enthusiast (12)
1.i.e. means 'that is', and doesn't indicate an example.
2.44 Don't like "as example" for "i.e."
3.Not a great surface
45. Should UK join EC then rebel, that might make one preoccupied with every new development
1.Good idea, and decent clue.
2.Verbose with extraneous words
47. The con is on: Japan's crazy nuke taking in international gadget obsessive
1.Can't figure out a meaningful surface
48. The con unfolded, unwanted e-mails that is, for a computer enthusiast.
1.Forced surface
49. The nun joke I cracked, initially tickled the gadget freak (12)
1.Happy with the phrasing, but second 'the' spoils it a bit, as does the comma, and tickled is a slightly iffy anagrind – perhaps upset?
50. Time to reflect about new addict — the gadget freak
1.Like this one a lot but is the 'THE' redundant?
2.addict in this context is not cryptic
3.Using 'addict' for 'junkie' in the wordplay is too close to the final definition for me.
4.'addict' in wordplay just splits the word along its roots, not the best device
51. User chasing latest piece of kit, installing new memory?
1.Love the clever construction; the def.'s OK as an example
2.Seems to clue "tNECHOjunkie". Also user for junkie is too direct for me, and overall a bit tough
3.Nice clue, but can't agree that this is an &lit