The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 2: Anna hoped it was hot in bed.

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A clue to IMARI (Printer’s Devilry).
3 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Syntax needs to "flow through" the solution to give the solver a fair chance. If Fifty Shades, it's "Ana" according to Wikipedia.
2.I quite like this, but I'm puzzled by the choice of Anna
3.There's nothing in the devilled version to help the solver arrive at the rather bland full version.