The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 13: Czech story about five golden rings seems awfully familiar to me, like I've heard it before! (6, 2 words)

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A clue to A “FIVE GOLD RINGS” word.
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Comments on the clue
1.Au=gold not golden. Also, you can't reasonably expect solvers to know the Czech word for story.
2.Original, but we can't assume solvers are familiar with Czech
3.DEJ – CZECH WORD FOR "STORY" – surely this is too obscure?
4.Surface doesn't convince. Dej as Czech word for story may be too obscure for solvers.
5.don't like use of a totally obscure Czech word. And you use 'golden' which is NOT 'au'. Either 'about' or 'rings' is redundant
6.Nice surface though wordplay rather fiddly and a bit obscure, AU = 'gold' rather than 'golden' and definition rather long.
7.Well composed (and a new word).
 
Comments on the competition
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This month 42 entries clued 18 valid words, with a further 3 clueing FIVE GOLD RINGS (6, 21, 24). Appropriately, clue words subdivided neatly into groups of 5. More than half the clues (25) led to the 5 most popular words, or variations thereon: DEJA VU (1, 5, 8, 12, 13, 25, 42*) (7), AVULS/E (9, 19, 31, 36*) /D (18) /ION (3) (6), BRAVURA (7, 37, 40*, 44) (4), NUNAVUT (28, 35*, 38, 39) (4) and SHAVUOT (17, 32, 41, 45*) (4). Another 5 clue words or variations resulted from a further 12 clues: CLAVUS (11, 14*, 27) (3), HELIO/GRAVURE (43, 10, 30*) (3), AVUNCULAR ([20, 33*) (2), CLAVULATE (15, 34*) (2), and FAVUS (22*, 23) (2). There were 5 other singly represented clue words which were generally more obscure (A VUESTRA SALUD (4), CHAVUTTI THIRUMAL (26), DAVUTOGLU (2), GUSTAVUS (16) and LAGAVULIN (29)). The average length of the 18 different clue wards was 8.4 letters, dropping to 7.4 letters when their relative frequencies was taken into account. In general it appeared to be easier to construct a good clue, and thereby score more highly, when a shorter clue word was chosen (the best 5 clues all had answers of 5 or 6 letters).