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A clue to ARMISTICE.
46 comments were received for this competition (from 9 competitors, 1 other)
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Comments on the competition
1.
Amazing that only one person spotted the Crimea anag.
2.
I love the simplicity yet completeness of clue 1.
 
Comments on the clues
1. 11/11 = 1
1.Clever but don’t think this would actually be solvable
2.Brilliant idea but 11/11 is Armistice Day, not really just an armistice
3.Ingenious. It's Armistice Day, of course. Nevertheless…
4.A great idea for a clue, but I wonder if it would need quite a logical leap (or a few crossing letters) to solve. 4 points.
3. "A Farewell to Arms" is a film I care madly about (9)
1.A cracker.
2.A reference to something from the real world always adds to a clue.
5. Ceasefire with dispersal of armies including those in charge basically (9)
1.Basically?!
6. Cities left destroyed after weapon ceasefire (9)
1.What's a weapon ceasefire?
7. Crimea, it's struggling for a truce
1.Simple but good
9. End of hostilities between warring sides with a right perfume and diamonds! (9)
1.'Right' clunks a bit.
10. Fighting over mice, it's a raptor's first killing
1.Your definition (a participial phrase) is adverbial, where the answer is a noun. I'm not sure the grinder works either.
14. I'm almost certain to get second wind and stay in action
1.Good idea, but the syntax and grammar doesn't work
16. It's a crime – failing to keep the peace?
1.Good clue, but the anagram is too common.
2.Does 'to keep' have a function?
17. It's a crime to arrange for peace
1.Good clue, but the anagram is too common.
2.I'm not getting how the fodder can arrange itself.
18. It’s a crime to break peace (9)
1.Good clue, but the anagram is too common.
2.Best of the 'crime' series
19. It's a crime to ruin a peace treaty (9)
1.Good clue, but the anagram is too common.
2.Best of the “it’s a crime” clues
3.An archaic intransitive usage makes this not ideal as an anagrind.
20. It's a crime to suspend hostilities?
1.Anagram indicator?
21. It’s a crime to violate ceasefire (9)
1.There is no intransitive sense of violate in the dictionaries.
24. Last of troops climbing over top of trench – I see an end to hostilities (9)
1.Ingenious. But the clue needs to be across for the 'over' indication as well as down for the reversal.
25. Leaders of armed resistance meet in secret: truce is called eventually
1.This feels more like a statement about an armistice, rather than a definition of one.
26. Legions drained of energy? Time to chill
1.doesn't give the required meaning, so can't accept this as &lit
27. Mars etc, I fancy, will accept one? Yes and no
1.I don't see how 'yes' can mean "see that wordplay you solved? Treat the surface in that as a counterexample so 'no' can stand as definition"
28. Maybe aim is truce without universal treaty (9)
1.Armistice ≠ treaty. Fundamentally different.
30. Military Intelligence overrides soldiers in stopping cold and ending fighting
1.'Cold' clunks.
31. Most of army is taking no notice of truce
1.Is it churlish to object to 'of'? Probably.
32. Outfit that's first to kill offering a truce
1.'That's' as 'that has' is ugly.
33. Peace out! it’s a crime (9)
1.I don't think this anagrind works before its fodder.
34. Perhaps it is time to put energy into breaking ones scimitar?
1.The generous sprinkling of extra words makes it hard to see the anagram.
38. Sounds as if Romeo hankered after kiss, losing head for some piece (9)
1.Don't think this is solvable: wp in the def half is outre enough without sharing its indicator with the regular wp.
39. Start of ceasefire between hostile armies, it maybe this
1.Unravels in the last 3 words. A case could be made for 'may be' (2 words) as anagrind, or any other conditional construction.
2."…may be…"
40. Supply weapons to cities moving towards ceasefire
1.Towards?
41. Surely this secures military redeployment?
1.A very clever composite anagram.
2.Can't make this work. I think you need yr indication of potential transformation BETWEEN the 2 states; hard if the 2nd contains yr main verb
42. Team is lacking energy with Rice out fighting suspension
1.Male solvers love a footie ref (but hate footie refs)
2.Nice definition.
3.NHO, but I see it's topical. Nice clue.
43. Truce with next-door neighbour after switching sides? It's a blur
1.Unsolvable: oblique ref to 50 yr old track; invisible 's as containment indicator; loose MIST synonym, padded with unhelpful article.
44. Weapon Mediterranean ship discovered end of unstable ceasefire
1.Cryptically ok, but does the surface syntax work?