The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 9: Drink in allure manifest in bust come to maturity, a hint of seduction in a pout recalling role in famous West End show

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A clue to MOUSETRAP / HERMITAGE (Right & Left).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.I think the surface reading suffers from the number of small parts involved in the clue.
2.Surface not very convincing. Just 'drink' as def is weak. And the second def also is technically not OK