The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 21: "Moving star" enticer maps route, haphazardly wandering Magi (Three Wise Men) destination. (Right and Left, (9) each)

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A clue to MOUSETRAP / HERMITAGE (Right & Left).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.The def. of 'mousetrap' is a clue to a clue, not fair on the solver.
2.there's a problem with the grammar/construction in the second half