The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 1: A second posh group complain about boring 'Cheese & Wine' in museum

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A clue to MOUSETRAP / HERMITAGE (Right & Left).
3 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.The A is possibly redundant
2.Starting 'A' seems redundant. For Hermitage, as a DD, the 'in' as a link not the best-not necessary too?
3.What are the 'about' and 'in' doing in the actual clue? (seems they're there only for the surface read).