CCCWC September competition voters’ comments
Clue no. 21: Guitarist who drowned in jar – Tumbling Dice?
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| I didn't think there was a single outstanding clue, but feel that 40 works very smoothly and give it 5 points. 27 earns four points for neat use of 'bunk', narrowly ahead of 37 where I felt that the plural 'disagreements' was rather awkward. 39 is a neat little &lit., earning 2 points, and I gave a point to 21 for a brave rock reference. |
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| Good to see many competitors keeping their clues short this time, even if the explanations are getting ever longer, 5 being the ultimate example of both. With so many definitions and so few letters, a BONES clue didn't need to be fancy. 13 and 27 stood out as simple ideas well handled to make satsifying clues, then 43 as a misleading definition and 32 and 39 as neatly worded & lits. 21's B(rian J)ones and 16's b(l)on(d)es both had the potential for a brilliant clue, but the cryptic elements didn't work for me. 23's definition 'hide inside' was too tenuous to carry an otherwise good idea. I also had my doubts about the promising-looking 36: for an & lit. 'remains of' must mean 'a part of' which it doesn't; otherwise 'of' must mean 'in', which it also doesn't. |
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| This was an easy word to clue, but much less so to clue in an elegant and original way and so that the answer was not too obvious. Five clues, however, well achieved those goals (39 – 4 points; 43, 46], 47 – 3 points each; 2 – 2 points – though all of them arguably deserved to score even more highly). It was especially pleasing to see a clutch of genuine and accomplished &lits (eg, 2, 39, 46, 47), even if there are a few competitors (eg, 21, 51) who still seem not to understand that for a clue to be genuinely &lit, EVERY word in the clue must make a valid contribution to BOTH definition AND subsidiary indication. (Where 30 and 35 are concerned, I am left wondering whether there is some meaning of “bones” that I am missing. ) In most months, there might well have been points for 19, 24, 32, 34 and 36. 50 has a nicely misleading surface, but the definition is spoiled by the fact that “marrow” in the sense of bone marrow surely has no plural; “marrow” (singular) would have met the demands of both definition and surface. I havered about 5, but concluded that it was just too devious. 14 reads very well, but the “I presume?” seems to make no valid contribution other than to the surface. The surface of 38 is seriously spoiled by the capital letters, I can only suppose because the author decided, on the basis of the Chambers entry, that only Bachelor with a capital B could be represented by B; that seems over-punctilious to me. |
