The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 16: Jazz CD, retro hot pants (Boss), lingerie, kirsch, mints

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A clue to A Christmas List (Anagram).
4 comments refer to this clue (from 3 competitors, 1 other)
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Comments on the clue
1.We need to see the pictures!
2.Nice prezzies – I’m sure Robert and John were delighted to receive the hot pants and lingerie!
3.With a little re-ordering, the brackets would not be needed.
 
Comments on the competition
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How do you judge a competition like this, when normal cluing criteria hardly apply? Plausible and natural-sounding surface perhaps? But maybe a zanier surface would be just as appropriate here. However, it might be a little easier to contrive, so I have rated the entries I think sound more natural slightly higher. I make 18 the winner, then 11, then 12, with 16 and 35 joint fourth. Merits to 22 and 37. I THINK JOHN TOZER'S CLUE IS NUMBER 16.