The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC November competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 18: Dispersed sunbeam initially refracted inside drink?

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A clue to SUBMARINE.
4 comments refer to this clue (from 4 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.I don't think "drink" is an adequate definition – or are we to allow "inside" to do double duty?
2.Good idea but 'initially' is such a crossword cliche
3...but 'submarine' doesn't mean sea.
4.Drink doesn't mean submarine