The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 36: Winner's corner having a good bubbly drink unfortunately ice ran out

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A clue to Christmas Cocktails (Right & Left).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Does need some punctuation, a comma after 'drink' perhaps
2.I like your story in the clue here, and the clue runs nicely.