CCCWC August competition voters’ comments on Clue no. 35

A clue to FAIRY / POINT (Right & Left).
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue

1.	1)r=piece? anyway individually listing all letters not so elegant; 2) Comma and 'then' being very obvious breaks between R&L
2.	Not sure where the R in fairy is coming from, and THEN is not part of either clue.