The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 13: Girl occupying fashionable flatshare – found it after trawling the net?

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A clue to FATHER-LASHER.
5 comments refer to this clue (from 4 competitors, 1 other)

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Comments on the clue
1.Good definition, but I don't think "girl" is a fair clue for 'her'.
2.Very nice but not sure about girl=her, or the pun in "fashionable"
3.Can't accept girl = her – what a pity it wasn't "Girl's"!
4.Not convinced by girl=her or ‘fashionable’. A good idea that doesn’t quite achieve its potential.
5.Very nearly — girl's would be better.