The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC June competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 6: Back in 1854, close by Sevastopol, location for a rasher additional charge almost certain to lead to trouble?

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A clue to COLLOP / SURTAX (Right & Left).
5 comments refer to this clue (from 5 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Too many extraneous and redundant words?
2.Back in 1845 needed?
3.'1854 close by' is redundant in the wordplay.
4.Prefer hidden clues not to have redundant words
5.An original idea for a clue.