The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

CCCWC Christmas Special competition voters’ comments
 
Clue no. 22: The Lent vow's broken around noon one year, double sandwich threw Derek's resolution after wife leaves for church

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A clue to TWELVEMONTH / A thematic word of your choice (Right & Left).
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Comments on the clue
1.Great idea, shame about the incorrect anagram.
2.There's no indication that the CE needs to be included in the anagram and isn't added separately.
3.The clue-writer has muddled their explanation. I assume 'noon' indicates M not N.
4.Lovely but for the fact that the clues are separate sentences (tenses of 'threw' and 'leaves' also don't match)
5.I like the first half, but the second is a bit too random
 
Comments on the competition
1.
I'm not sure any of us really managed to achieve all of 1) accurate cluing, 2) a well-disguised run-on between the two parts, and 3) an excellent overall surface. 4 leaps out, but surely the apostrophe in '16 invalidates the definition of HEXADECIMAL. I did try to overlook it (as I expect many will). I enjoyed 19 and 22 for their cluing and excellent surfaces (especially 22), although neither managed to string the two parts together smoothly, and in 22 they are separate sentences. Perhaps the best clue in that respect, while also being sound and plausible, was 20. I found half a dozen other clues good in parts. Happy New Year to organisers and fellow participants.