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Clue no. 11: Four Seasons motel, when TV breaks, orders pieces – missing one, unfortunately – for older model

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A clue to TWELVEMONTH / A thematic word of your choice (Right & Left).
3 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 1 other)

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Comments on the clue
1.There is some punctuation between the two halves of your clue but I think the join is hidden enough.
2.Decent if a bit stuttery, and 'pieces' not very natural
3.Nice surface but not keen on 'missing ine, unfortunately'- doesn't quite work.