The Crossword Centre Clue-Writing Competition

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Clue no. 46: Trump:"What a cock-up. Khan's not even a proper American" (7)

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A clue to CHOCTAW.
2 comments refer to this clue (from 2 competitors, 0 others)

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Comments on the clue
1.Good try, but the cryptic reading has been sacrificed for the surface I think
2.Ingenious but not very solver-friendly to say the least